Katie Smith
Your blog is very clear and good. Showing good research your
pictures are very good and your front image shows a good link in with the genre
giving a good clue of what it is based on you had added good video of the clear
genre and all links in together. The strengths are the photo and head ines but I
think you could make the title a lot more bigger and bold adding more
headlines, more detail and pictures. It would be a good idea to add maybe a
title advertising a competition.
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