Name of person giving feedback: Kristina Lamb
The blog is coming along nicely. You could include some more information about your view on your front covers and what you think is good and bad about them.
Strengths
-The main article photo looks really good and professional it definitely tells us what your genres about.
- Your masthead looks professional.
Improvements
-You haven't really said what your main article is about.
- The left hand side is a bit bare, i'm sure you could add a few more conventional things to make it look more professional.
-The purple font is good but it doesn't really match with the genre. Its quite a loud colour.
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